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StarrGazer
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0 posted 2000-07-10 06:21 PM


Destiny's Star

When the earth is bathed in moonbeams
And children have laid down to dreams
I slip outside in search of a special star
Wondering if you can see it from where you are

There it is shining ever so bright
A beacon to my heart each night
Constant and true way up above
I fill it with thoughts of my love

It twinkles with a message from my heart
I wonder if you'll get it, we're so far apart…
Does a star ever speak to you
Whispering that this love is true?

Our destiny was cast in the stars one night
Loving you is real, meant to be, right
I close my eyes and make a wish
Hoping you'll come to realize this

Though we are not now together  
It will not be that way forever
One day we will be side by side
With one special star as our guide


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-10 07:21 PM


StarrGazer~
I enjoyed this so much.
So glad you shared these lovely thoughts.

'When the earth is bathed in moonbeams
And children have laid down to dreams
I slip outside in search of a special star
Wondering if you can see it from where you are'

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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2 posted 2000-07-10 10:07 PM


This is beautiful, Starrgazer! I love it! I also love your picture! So nice to finally see you!

Denise

StarrGazer
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3 posted 2000-07-11 12:34 PM


thanks Marge, Denise   glad you liked it !
brian madden
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ireland
4 posted 2000-07-11 04:36 PM


Stargazer, a magically picture you have painted, very beautiful.

"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers.

a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
5 posted 2000-07-11 05:22 PM


This touches a special chord in me...you seem to capture the perfect definition of long distance love...*sniffles*. Thank you! (I need a tissue)
--the little one


[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 07-11-2000).]

StarrGazer
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Texas
6 posted 2000-07-12 02:12 AM


Thanks Brian, lil girl... exactly what it was written about long distance love  
midnightblues
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Singapore
7 posted 2000-07-12 06:57 AM


Romance and melancholy in one piece! I must say I've fallen in love with your writing!

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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