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Susan C. Davis New Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 6Talent, Oregon, USA (In So. Oregon five minutes off Interstate 5) |
SAYING GOODBYE I awoke with a start to a rush of air and a soft flutter against my cheek. In Tinkerbell fashion, a shimmer of light hovered in the darkness about my head. With a giggle and a whoosh! it darted off again, the remnants of a blown kiss trailing behind.... To travel on assignment past the twinkling stars and the Man in the Moon...onward and upward to the magical Kingdom. And through the silence of the night came a lilting melody, sung high and slightly off key-- When I arose with the dawn, upon my pillow lay a sprinkling of stardust. I knew that one more place had been set at the Celestial Table. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I like the way you wrote this poem, it has a special touch. Welcome to Passions, please check your mail. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great touch. I enjoyed the poem very much. It is a sad piece. I yearn for more from you to read.  Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ Welcome to Passion's family. This is just a wonderful read. 'When I arose with the dawn, upon my pillow lay a sprinkling of stardust. I knew that one more place had been set at the Celestial Table.' Looking forward to more from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Susan C. Davis New Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 6Talent, Oregon, USA (In So. Oregon five minutes off Interstate 5) |
Thank you all for the wonderful welcome. What a nice site for sharing. I look forward to looking at the new submissions each day after work. Haven't done much with poetic words, but they're "in there" somewhere! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Susan! This is enchanting! I look forward to reading more from you! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Welcome to Passions..may your stay here be long and fulfilling!!  this is an enchanting read...reminds me of fairy tales in which dreams can come true |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Welcome to Passions Susan! I'm new too *S* I love this...this pain of loss deep in the heart...yet we realise that we can actually survive it! The feeling is magical! *huGz* keep posting! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
susan..this is a great poem--i love the fairytale aspect of it! and youve used your words well keep posting! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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