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dr tung
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 55
singapore

0 posted 2000-07-08 02:40 PM


as i reach my hands to touch her
i did it like a joke
but what i wanted to show her
was that i love her so

so i reach my hand to feel her
on her head a gentle pat
she grabbed my hand so tightly
if only courage i had

i would tell her "i love you"
something i kept inside of me
till then i couldn't say it
heck just let it be

seize the chance i was thinking
but damn i felt afraid
couldn't help not feeling
she'll turn and walk away

we grasp our hands so tightly
although i love her so
i released my hands so gently
that step i could not go

as i reflect on that minute
my heart felt much regret
i swear next time i'll do it
not another lost chance had


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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-07-08 03:49 PM


I hope next time you have the courage it takes to make that step. Thanks for sharing your feelings in a poem here with us.
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2000-07-09 10:34 AM


Simple words, yet conveys feelings in-depth...I've seen your previous poems b4 I became a member.....Like your style. Keep posting ok? *winkZ*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-07-09 03:33 PM


Sometimes we have to work up our courage. Great poem!

Denise

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