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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-07-06 08:41 PM


Anger

Crystal mountains
of flowing warmth
penetrating the depth
of emotional balance
within the inner core
of ones intricate mind.

Sensually tasting
the salty residue
fallen upon your tongue
from earths crystals.

Fluttering eyelids
protecting from the burning
course sands of swirling
wind swept pain.

Decorative gallows
visible in the distance
create a scene of past
diabolical turmoil of souls.

Anger of the strongest strength
brews below surface
of where seaweed
and coral tangle together
breaking and splitting you
into tiny shards of nothing.



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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2000-07-06 11:26 PM


Very, very descriptive! An in-depth look into the dark chambers of the soul...yet so real and picturisque...I could never do that...envious *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
2 posted 2000-07-07 07:29 AM


One of the harshest emotions available.  Exellent description.  

Kevin

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-07-07 08:05 PM


Anger can certainly be destructive. You have described it so well!

Denise

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2000-07-08 06:49 AM


WOW........what a way to describe the emotion, amazing images... in one word EXCELLENT.

"Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison

chibi_dragon
Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58

5 posted 2000-07-08 10:07 AM


Nice description on how bad anger can be, especially when you take it out on someone else...
--Chibi

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