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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I see your face, I want to hide. From the pain I feel inside. I thought I was in forever love. 'Twas not the case, not blessed from above. The passion and joy, We had felt. Are still a part, of this broken heart. I cannot deny, My love for you still resides, In the chambers of my heart, It's still there though were apart. I need not, Hear your name. My friends all say, I'm insane. It may have been, My fault back then. I've tried again yet to start, My world hs just been torn apart. I need not, Feel your touch. To know that, I'm still in love. I feel it within my beating heart. The love we had from the start. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Sad piece  ,but not lacking in depth and romance ^_* wonder how you do it with words that rhyme... *midnightblues shakes her head and sighs* i never seem to be able to portray my feelings into a pretty poem...hey I like your work...*S*If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
That's a very sad poem,but very pretty! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kevin, This poem is well written, and so full of deep emotion. I hope one day your heart is mended, and you find happiness. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm.. yes, it IS prettily written.. well, I hope someone can sew your world back together, and mend your heart.. Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Keith, You are a wonderful poet and this poem really pours from the depths of your heart..and I really can feel you in this one. A wise man once said to me... "Your heart will love again until then trust your friends. For they want to see you through all the worries that bother you" Hmm....I hope you can find comfort in your own words, Keith! Love, Beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kevin: ..the dark side of love...  sad but written well..take care of your heart friend  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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