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chibi_dragon
Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 58

0 posted 2000-07-05 12:41 PM

There is a dream out there
A dream that is lovely
And rather rare
There are people in this sphere
Unknowing of this gift here
Dream me love

Dreaming is something special
As it is fine
In fact, if you ask me,
It's rather divine
Those who are lucky (like me I might add)
May sometimes end a little sad
--and still I dream love

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 07-05-2000).]

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2000-07-05 10:25 AM

Hello chibi! That's a pretty poem. Simple and realistic, rhymes nicely too! I like this *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

2 posted 2000-07-05 11:33 AM

Great piece. I long to feel all my dreams.

Enjoyable Look forward to reading more.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

3 posted 2000-07-05 05:31 PM

Not bad for a first post, Chibi (even though half of it is mine, but I'm not that angry at you). You really seem to captivate the emotion, to really describe what some people feel

. Believe me, I more than know

-Venus Macleod

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

4 posted 2000-07-05 06:46 PM

Very cute! I like it!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-07-05 09:10 PM

Welcome to Passions, Chibi! I enjoyed your poem! I had to edit your note at the top and the dashed line in order for me to be able to send your 'Welcome'. The first time I tried it didn't work...only the note stating this was your first poem was printed on the card. Well, anyway, welcome to Passions!

Denise

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

6 posted 2000-07-06 02:12 AM

Well done. ^_^
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

Luv,

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2000-07-07 01:13 AM

welcome to passions!!!

i like the stong silent optimism in this poem and the fact that it is presented short and sweet...i always admire those people who seem to be able to express more in less words

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