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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-07-04 03:20 PM


Many moons ago, King Authur sent Sir Berwyn
to guard LarksKeep.
That with his life thus protect Gwynedd
in castle on mountain steep.
Thus cloaked in curse of invisible mist,
a love there grew neither could resist.
So unbeknown by the King,
Quest begun and ended,
by his very command
for the castle defended.

Morgana's wrath, as now a woman scorned,
doth tell Berwyn the secret so bemourned.
That tryst between King Authur and Queen Bryn,
hath born half Fairy, half human,
dear sweet Gwyn.
Berwyn, brave heart, a knight so true,
loves Gwynedd for her heart, he doth persue.
For his fair maid he will love forever more.
Secret no matter now, shall keep him from
the one he does adore.

Epilogue...
Morgana was never heard from again.
Guinevere forgave her King his tryst.
Fairy Queen Bryn married the bravest Fairy
Prince, Loganspear.
Merlin continued to apprentice Gwynedd
with her magic gifts, that she used many
times to help her father keep Camelot safe.

Berwyn and Gwynedd lived happily everafter!
THE END






[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-05-2000).]

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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-07-04 03:24 PM


Ellie, My applause for a very well done story, that was captivating from the beginning. Thank You  
kelieth
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Normal IL - USA
2 posted 2000-07-04 03:47 PM


Agreed Excellent Job.     I'm speechless < !signature-->

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."




[This message has been edited by kelieth (edited 07-04-2000).]

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-07-04 09:02 PM


But dear Ellie,
  This tale ended much too soon- though Happy.  I should think that if you looked hard enough that you should come up with another fantsastic tale of mystic wonders and courtly quests.  Take this as a thanks for a job well done and a request that you think about further tales to share with us.

And as the curtain comes down they all shout in unison--Bravo! Bravo!Bravo!

           David

White Knight
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

4 posted 2000-07-05 02:08 AM


Bravo Lady Ellie,
  Telling thy story so true, of loves sweet surrender, and mischief foiled, WELL DONE!
This Knight salutes Thee!

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2000-07-05 08:00 AM


Ahhhh Ellie - And they lived happily ever after!!! Tremendous job, excellent writing,
terrific read from beginning to end.  I bow before you dear lady, 'twas wonderful.  Bonnie

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-07-05 09:21 PM


Wonderful writing, Ellie!  

Denise

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