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dreamer1775
Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20
florida

0 posted 2000-07-04 01:17 PM


tonight, my love
as i lay in your arms
time has stopped.

tonight, my love
with your tender kisses
my heart doesn't want the night to end.

tonight, my love
as you take my hand,
i can see eternity in your eyes.

tonight, my love
within this darken room,
between the space of you and me,
this night
will last forever in my heart.

tonight, my love
i realize my love for you,
will shine for all to see,
as bright as the sun.

tonight, my love
you have come to me,
to take me in your arms,
to never leave.

tonight, my love
i whishper the words i've always feared,
silently they fall from my tongue,
i love you, from now till the end.
tonight, my love



kayte
life is a banquet and most poor suckers are starving to death so ...live...live..live

© Copyright 2000 kayte - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-07-04 02:55 PM


Dreamer: This so romantic and sensual and exquisitely written! Wow!  Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


kelieth
Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
2 posted 2000-07-04 03:42 PM


Exellent emotional moving.  The list goes on and on.  Loved this one.  



Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

dreamer1775
Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20
florida
3 posted 2000-07-04 03:58 PM


thank you both of you


kayte
life is a banquet and most poor suckers are starving to death so ...live...live..live

chibi_dragon
Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58

4 posted 2000-07-05 12:20 PM


Hey dreamer,
Not bad for romance. It just discribed the night that I had  a while ago with my friend.
--the cute dragon

dreamer1775
Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20
florida
5 posted 2000-07-05 12:25 PM


this peom among many i write here are all written to my beloved boyfriend who's in the marnies. i don't see him much so these are all the things i want to tell him, i will tell him when we see each other again.

kayte
life is a banquet and most poor suckers are starving to death so ...live...live..live

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