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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-07-03 05:48 PM


Kissed By Heaven

I sit here
Head spinning
What hit me
I don't know
The day
Just played me
Everything
So beautiful
And delightfully
Serene
I feel like a dove
Floating
Above
The atmosphere
Looking down
Seeing myself
Kissed by heaven

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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-07-03 06:18 PM


LD, I love those days of euphoria where everything just perfect and you are kissed by heaven. They fade too fast and are too rare. a wonderful poem. really enjoyed it.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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2 posted 2000-07-03 08:29 PM


Oh LD - What a beautiful, uplifting poem.  Glad you had such a great day.... reading this just made mine a lot better!  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-07-03 08:44 PM


days like that are truly to be savored. I love the way you captured the feeling of it in this lovely poem. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
4 posted 2000-07-04 10:08 AM


The day is good when you feel this blessed,
I'm glad to see you in such happiness.  

Great Piece.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Denise
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5 posted 2000-07-05 09:31 PM


Don't you just love it when that happens!?
Beautiful poem, Gloria!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
6 posted 2000-07-05 10:52 PM


Lost Dreamer,
  WOW! Thanks for taking us on this HIGH with you! Well Done!
Dennis :^)

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
7 posted 2000-07-06 04:46 AM


Golly I love this! Often have feelings like this...but never tried conveying it in a poem...I feel...spirited! Thanks!

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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