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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-07-03 10:26 AM


Oh what things I see
With my mind's eye,eyelids closed
Vivid midnight shows!

Changed reality
Oh what possibilities
And it seems so real!

Mind's free matinee
In sub-conscious darkness plays
A private screening.

With a changing cast
Yet most often I'm involved
Acting out strange parts.

Oft' they make no sense
These wierd nocturnal visions
Amuse nonetheless.

Nightly tidbits weaved
Snatched from my reality
Fiction's fantasies!


© Copyright 2000 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-07-03 03:26 PM


David,
  WOW nicely told theme Haikus! Well done!
Dennis :^)

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 2000-07-03 04:04 PM


Very dreamy!  

Denise

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2000-07-03 05:47 PM


~David~

As always very creative and unique haikus  
I loved these!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-07-03 08:50 PM


David; I like the weaving of the theme here and the dreamy feel they evoke. These are so
.. abstract and artistically poetic. You are so good at this!  Ellie/Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-07-04 02:44 AM


David~
Very enjoyable, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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