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a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2000-07-03 09:54 AM


Well, everyone, here is yet another one of my poems!
      
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Love, Kindness and Humanity
Is not what some see
Those unspoken words
Those bleeding wounds

We are somewhat blind
To the reality that we find
In Africa, India
All of those places

Don't be blind to the harshness
Of these truths
Of the hunger beyond
The wanting of love

Does God want this?
The suffering on the planet
this Earth that is His?
--No, I think not
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-Venus Macleod


© Copyright 2000 Karen McLeod - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-07-03 09:51 PM


couldn't pass this one by...how could I?
a little girl and god's blessings?
for what it's worth, you have mine too..

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-07-03 09:52 PM


oopsie!!!

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-03-2000).]

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
3 posted 2000-07-04 10:12 AM


Such an insightful piece.  Touching the strings of my heart.

Great Job



Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

chibi_dragon
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 58

4 posted 2000-07-04 09:11 PM


Hey girl, I like your style. It's harsh but true down to the core.
--the cute dragon

chibi_dragon
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 58

5 posted 2000-07-04 09:11 PM


Hey girl, I like your style. It's harsh but true down to the core.
--the cute dragon

a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
6 posted 2000-12-27 06:36 PM


Well I think that we brought this upon ourselves. If we can just look past the surface, we can see that we're all the same.

~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~
Myself



pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
7 posted 2000-12-28 06:02 PM


for some, turning a blind eye to the horrors of the world is the only way they can cope with it. the rest of us who cannot turn away can only look helplessly on and our souls grieve at man's injustice to man.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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