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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-07-02 04:46 PM


Tis a magical place is Mawr Glen.
There is no beginning ne'er an end.
Misty and serene, sweet mystery there.
To all the Fairies this tis their lair.
Queen of the Fairies, lovely Bryn,
thosands of years,the Queen she's been.
The crown of her beauty, beyond compare,
her eyes of blue, her hair so fair.
Powers of magic she doth use for good,
as she reigns o'er dale and flowering wood.

To yonder mount she often stares,
a sadness in her heart doth tare.
For Gwynedd's secret in her heart she keeps,
many a time hath this made her weep.

Oh, warrior Knight, Bryn's greatest love,
hath their tryst brought wrath from above?
Was passion worth this cruel jest?
So now she calls him to a Quest..
We must find a Knight whose heart tis true.
This Quest to redeem us, we must persue.



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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2000-07-02 08:08 PM


Your second installment reads so fair,
It leaves me gasping for more air-
What will this knightly quest require--
Do pray tell, for I inquire.
You tease and keep us in suspense
With skillful recounting-of fairy sense.
I will be looking, with anticipation,
Your novel words- in poetic renditon.
So bless you, Sweet Ellie, Story-Teller
As you unfold your mystics letters.

This is Great Sis,  I am loving it!
                David


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-07-02 08:35 PM


the quest Sir David,
doth require
a Kinght who has
a heart that's true
so that once the secret
thus revealed
will not deter
a heart that sees
only the beloveds'
heart of hearts.
thank you gentle sir
for your kindest words
thy kindness is so
gently recieved
by this faie maid.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-07-02 09:48 PM


This is enchanting, Ellie!  

Denise

White Knight
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

4 posted 2000-07-02 10:49 PM


M'Lady Ellie,

I'll publish thy message,
A True Knight is needed,
Thy help may be comming,
If my message be heeded!

White Knight salutes Thee!  

[This message has been edited by White Knight (edited 07-02-2000).]

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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5 posted 2000-07-03 08:20 PM


Ahhhhhh Ellie - This is wonderful, patiently waiting for more.....

Tis well written Ellie dear,
Can't wait til the next installments here...


Bonnie


Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-07-04 12:18 PM


Lovely, mysterious tale, I love it.  
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