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allan
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On the road

0 posted 2000-07-02 01:36 PM


the not-quite-blackness flickered and through it splattered vibrant shimmering colours, patterns, vibrations, crazy flights of animation, soaring rejoicing swoops of joy, jagged zig-zags of pain - all of you - all of us - right here - now  


© Copyright 2000 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-07-02 04:26 PM


Allan; romantic ane ethereal. I like this.
Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-07-02 05:48 PM


This one is really psychedelic, allan. Love the format, too! I wonder what it was inspired by  

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Denise
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3 posted 2000-07-02 09:55 PM


Very nice! I enjoyed this Allan!  

Denise

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
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4 posted 2000-07-04 11:31 AM


To the point.  

Good writing Allen

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road
5 posted 2000-07-04 12:41 PM


Thanks all!

Funnily enough Lotharingia it's not what you might think...

I wrote it a while back about a group of people similar to this group - the 'Brainstorms' community. And I feel the same about our little community here, so I thought it appropriate. In short it's about all of us and our interactions online - happy, sad, creative, friendly and nicely crazy too...

Allan




[This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-04-2000).]

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
6 posted 2000-07-04 02:48 PM


Oh! I thought it was about your recent trip to the love parade.  

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


brian madden
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ireland
7 posted 2000-07-04 05:58 PM


Sums it up perfectly Allan. really enjoyed this piece.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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