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dr tung
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0 posted 2000-07-02 07:13 AM


when love was in the air,
there's no worries, no cares,
one reason, because you're there.
when you're no longer near,
being alone, my only fear.
now, fully recovered
great friends there for me
new joy i discovered
once in the darkest deepest ditch
but now thw Lord has rescued me


something i wrote some 4 years ago after my first break up



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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-07-02 10:02 AM


This has a wonderful message of how friends and our faith can carry us through.
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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2 posted 2000-07-02 10:41 AM


Hello there, you've got flair!!
Thanks for treating me to this simple piece, but not lacking in depth at all!
Cheers to this! *S*

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
3 posted 2000-07-02 12:31 PM


It will never cease to amaze.  What friends you'll find in the days.  When your life's not going well.  Friends and faith help to heal.  Good piece.  
Great job

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

dr tung
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4 posted 2000-07-08 02:55 PM


thanks for your comments
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