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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-07-02 02:20 AM


A cool chill
Runs down my spine.
When your thoughts
Cross my mind.

They bring up, such happy tears.
Cause of all that we have shared.

You cross my mind
Thus I see
All the beauty,
You were to me.

I made you laugh from time to time.
You always seemd to ease my mind.

The little ways,
I'd tease you.
Like on the night
Of that full moon.

I danced to your favorite tune.
You thought me bad to just tease you.

On the other
Side of the coin.
You drove me
Out of my mind.

You'd run your fingers through my hair.
Then have me wait while you prepared.

What that night,
Lie in store.
You slowly, sweetly
Crossed the floor.

I loved the way we were as two.
The heavens know I miss you.


Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

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Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-07-02 07:02 AM


Kevin, Your beautiful memories speak volumes in this poem. Nicely done, I love it.  
midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2000-07-02 10:50 AM


Hi! I like this piece. It inspires me to look at relationships and passion from other angles. Thanks for the treat.
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-07-02 02:00 PM


man what a great piece i really loved it as i do all your work and hey she misses you to and one day you'll be together again hey maybe my true and her are friends up there who knows. well i wish the best of luck to you and hope all things work out for you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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