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Morning Light

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-02 12:58 PM

           Sun rise
    With early morning light
So yellow as a good humored fellow
       With which emotion
        Should i bellow?
  Call the name of the suns rays
     I'd say forever just to
              Lay
      In the suns warm rays.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

1 posted 2000-07-02 01:58 AM

Thus the laxy days of summer,
Greeted with graceful praise.
With this one I feel the rays.

Great job.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-07-02 05:26 AM

dont we all just want to sit and laze around, basking in the warmth of the mighty sun?!!!

With which emotion
Should i bellow?
like these two lines very much

yes,its up to us whether we will want to embrace or reject the warmth of the sun's rays...nice job here

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