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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Well...uh...here's another one for Spyro...hope he likes it...  ____________________________________________ She raises her face to the sun, The darkness she will shun The child looks on, his battle with disease won His face is the first she sees, His hair flowing in the breeze He stares at Nature's wonder, A rose, not a blunder A rose looked back, his beauty not a lack Time goes by and the boy wonders why The rose is not red It's bud seemingly not fed He holds the rose in his palm, and hears the wind's funeral psalm "Oh well," he says "There's always Spring, spring always has something to bring. --He sits and waits for the roses _________________________________ "Roses are red, violets are blue..." --Venus [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 07-01-2000).] |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Spine chilling ode to a rose. Thus I see this a great post.  Great Job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
^_^ Nice!! what a lovely picture you paint.. *vote* Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Another delicate rose gone...  . I think the message is 'Life is Short'. I take this one to the heart.--the cute dragon |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Another delicate rose gone... . I think the message is 'Life is Short'. I take this one to the heart.--the cute dragon |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I relished this piece like yummy chocolates! Melancholic and spirited. *S* |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Such a dignified boy..he has been tortured by disease and yet he remains hopeful and bright-eyed about the future.... this one i liked but i am confused about "she"---does "she" refer to the rose itself? |
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