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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I didn't want to feel relief (but I felt it anyway..) I did not choose to hug my knees, or grin in my lop-sided way... I didn't mean to do my dance of happiness before the screen... I did not mean to weep, m'friend. I did not mean to need. Intensity, of thought made blush. Sacred silence in this now... serenity adrift in clouds-- "Dream sweet," I whisper morning's vow... |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
We all need that friend on which to lean. Thanks for exploring this wondrous scene. Of thy friend helping thee. It helps me see several pleas.  Great Job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Wow.. what a scene... such beautiful wording.. "I didn't want to feel relief (but I felt it anyway..) I did not choose to hug my knees, or grin in my lop-sided way..." my favourite piece.. ^^ Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Intensity, of thought made blush. Sacred silence in this now... serenity adrift in clouds-- "Dream sweet," I whisper morning's vow... ---------------- me thinks your feeling better me sweet... would pay money to see that dance at the screen  love this one... the last verse is perfect... where ya at me twin... missing or musing? *winkie winkie* melovesya me What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
-serenity's screen dance- So, The trees were leaning into the street, Clogging the storm drains, sapping concrete. The thunder fell all about me, But serenity danced behind her screen. Lightning made the hot air worse -- At least twelve degrees more unbearable. I thought my nightmares were bad, of course, But this storm was unassailable. And occasionally, when no rhymes were in force, Made briefly unavailable, I watched serenity dance behind her screen. The night fell hotter still, The moon was like a slivered rill Of running water turning to dust. I sweat so freely, I thought I would rust. I lost so cleanly, I thought I would bust. I watched so dearly, serenity dancing. In lust? No. Tonight, happiness is enough. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
By the way, S'en, that was my thanks for you writing such a cool poem. Duh! Mike [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
keleith, and Yu Lan, I thank you much for your kindness as I "popped" into your corner of the forum...I appreciate it... Janet Marie--send money, will dance for money...How much money? aw, what the hell it's on the house this morning...lol, Mike--apparently I can run but I cannot hide..lol...I swear, baby, I was just gonna pop into the pub for a minute!!! and the poem...oh...me loves ya...did ya see me dancing again? grinning and hugging my knees again...e ya later, I promise... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
for Mike ...  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
right backatchaM. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ You're just a plethora of thought ! And a little mischievious imp too ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Well not bad for 5 am in the morning. I'm usually snoring so loud at that time that you could hear me in China! --Chibi |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
chibi---damn,,,was that YOU? |
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