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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2000-07-01 02:17 AM



TIME:

Happy and sad,
A moment in bed,
Always charging forward,
And never sleeping...

Hands in motion,
Hunger being fed,
Slipping by discreetly,
And sometimes creeping...

Methodical,
A mere step ahead,
Of predestination,
And record keeping...

Holding steady,
A chance for the dead,
Infinitely pressing,
And forward leaping...

A memory,
Only in my head,
Gone before you know it,
And onward sweeping...

-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-

© Copyright 2000 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-07-01 02:47 AM


^_^ an interesting piece of work here! ^_^

my compliments to you, brother bob..



Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu



childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-07-01 09:41 AM


You've captured the essence of time very well Bob.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


kelieth
Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
3 posted 2000-07-01 10:56 AM


Time runs rampet for all to see,  It changes all with a gracefull sweep.

Great poem of time.  Well done.  
< !signature-->

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."


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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2000-07-02 06:21 PM


Yu Lan,

Thanks for the compliments and good luck on the exams.

child o mine,

Really, time is much more diverse than I could ever express in words... thank you.

kelieth,

Your poem and signature are very appropriate representations of time.

Bob <><

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2000-07-12 08:24 AM


Vote! I call this ART! ur mastery opens my 3rd eye *winkZ*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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