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Cloudy Sensations ( Haikus )

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deleeme
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0 posted 06-30-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Foggily notioned
I'm wispy or threatening
Or marshmellow plump.

Suspended above
Borne about by wind currents
I stay not for long.

As I watch the world
It's brightness often obscured
Sometimes tears I cry.

Some think me a friend
Those distressed by summer's sun
Welcome my presence.
© Copyright 2000 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
childomine
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1 posted 07-01-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Enjoyed these but especially like the third.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

Dennis L. White
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2 posted 07-01-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

David,
  WOW! You're getting REAL GOOD at these! WAY TO GO!
Dennis :^)



Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)
kelieth
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3 posted 07-01-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for kelieth   Email kelieth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kelieth's Home Page   View IP for kelieth

Such a romantic piece in an wonderful way.  To describe the moon's very place.  

Great Job.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 07-01-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Dear Haiku King; So you shall be dubbed!
For sooth thou arrest the King of the Kingdom of Haiku and beyond! This honored reader doth declare it!
JOY 14
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It's almost one continous piece.  Very nice.

Joy
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6 posted 07-01-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

deleeme,
a delightful peek for the reader into the fluffy world of clouds you really are getting better at these haiku
Denise
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Very nice, David!  

Denise
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 07-09-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David~
Very, very lovely.
~*Marge*~


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midnightblues
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Heavenly! *S*

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wonderful!
 
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