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deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-06-30 09:42 PM

Foggily notioned
I'm wispy or threatening
Or marshmellow plump.

Suspended above
Borne about by wind currents
I stay not for long.

As I watch the world
It's brightness often obscured
Sometimes tears I cry.

Some think me a friend
Those distressed by summer's sun
Welcome my presence.

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

1 posted 2000-07-01 09:43 AM

Enjoyed these but especially like the third.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-07-01 10:35 AM

David,
WOW! You're getting REAL GOOD at these! WAY TO GO!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

3 posted 2000-07-01 11:05 AM

Such a romantic piece in an wonderful way. To describe the moon's very place.

Great Job.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2000-07-01 01:58 PM

Dear Haiku King; So you shall be dubbed!
For sooth thou arrest the King of the Kingdom of Haiku and beyond! This honored reader doth declare it!

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

5 posted 2000-07-01 04:16 PM

It's almost one continous piece. Very nice.

Joy

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2000-07-01 08:26 PM

deleeme,
a delightful peek for the reader into the fluffy world of clouds

you really are getting better at these haiku

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-07-02 09:46 PM

Very nice, David!

Denise

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2000-07-09 06:28 PM

David~
Very, very lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

9 posted 2000-07-12 08:08 AM

Heavenly! *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-12-25 11:36 AM

wonderful!

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