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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-06-29 06:44 PM


I came across some old diaries of a girl called "Gwynedd of Larkskeep" and thought I'd put her story to verse...

I walk the halls of castles lonely Keep.
High upon this mountain steep.
Below I look upon the enchanted Mawr Glen.
Where fairies roam, you know not where or when.

My secret to my heart well kept,
that my lonely days have need and wept.
Only King Arthur, father so dear,
and so few others, I wish were near,
know this maidens terrible truth held deep,
twill ever stay loves kiss from waking my sleep.

Refining magics mystic gifts, is how I pass my days.
Merlin comes to teach, that I might learn his ways,
of using gifts for honors sake,
stead of darkest arts,
as was Morgana's fate, as she chose the lesser part.

I shall tell thee more, of this story true.
My secret then you'll learn of many colors hue.

© Copyright 2000 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-06-29 06:48 PM


Oh Ellie, What a beautiful job you have done with this.  It read like a dream, can't wait to hear more.  Bonnie
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-06-29 10:00 PM


Dear Ellie,
  You start your tale most wonderfully
a Mystic tale to tell,
  And again I doth see rhyme
which to me is so well.
Pray tell dear Sister, tell us more
What hath in store this lass?
Unfold to us it's secrets-=
So we will know at last!

Very enjoyable looking forward to the next,   David


kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
3 posted 2000-06-30 08:00 AM


Excellent piece.  I look forward to reading more.  Wonderful grace and flow.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

White Knight
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

4 posted 2000-06-30 12:20 PM


Fair lady, pray speak thee,
Of this enchanted Mawr Glen,
I've yet to encounter,
Where the faiyres doth spin,
Please continue Thy vision,
Whence Thou returneth again!

This Knight awaits!

[This message has been edited by White Knight (edited 06-30-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-07-01 02:09 PM


Dear Knight
thy wait is over,
the morrow brings
more mystic tale
of Mawr Glen
and quests abound
in fairies lair.

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