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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Wait, was that back there a light shining on my worries? No, it wasn't It was a car whose headlights shone through the woods As it passed by without recognition you were here. Wait though, doesn't that mean I am not stranded here alone? Doesn't that mean other life forms are alert and going on in these very parts of the world? Yes, but you are the only one stranded in your thoughts trying to make sense of what cannot be made sense of. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Profound piece of personnal delimma.  Great job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
And amazing alteration on your part. Joy |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Wow, r u a mind reader Joy?? ^_^ this poem is so real, I know what u mean.. love the way u wrote this.. Well done, Joy.. another masterpiece Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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