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kelieth
Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-06-29 07:18 AM


On the eve,
Of our love,
We were blessed,
From above.

Your soft blond hair,
Sea green eyes.
Brightened up,
My very life.

I held you
So very close.
I felt you shudder,
No breeze to pose

You and I,
Love entertwined,
Like the ivy,
That grew outside.

Closer than two
Bodies could come.
Souls touching
The fire of love.

The sweet hot feel,
Of passionate breaths.
Rasped and warm
Passed our lips.

Moveing to,
A private dance.
Love hath,
Given us the chance.

To procure
A lasting vow.
Securing love
To us right now.

The joing of,
Our two souls.
Allowed a child,
to soon be born.

___________________________________________________

I write this to a never ending memory of my wife and the son I almost had.  They are the inspiration to a lot of my posts.


Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

© Copyright 2000 Kevin A. Lormand - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-06-29 10:38 AM


Kevin, This is such a beautiful poem, you express the love the two of you shared delightfully.

May each day the light shine a little brighter on your soul.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-06-30 08:12 AM


Kevin: This lovely tribute touched my heart. I feel the love that you describe here and it is beautiful! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
3 posted 2000-06-30 08:21 AM


Keleith - Another beautiful poem that sounds as if it is coming straight from the heart.  A wonderful love expressed beautifully.  Bonnie
Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-06-30 12:28 PM


Kevin,
  You paint such a sweet and romantic vision with your words! WOW!
  Did someone turn the airconditioner off here in the Pub? I feel a heat wave! It's getting hot in here! WHEW!
Dennis :^)

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-06-30 01:28 PM


"You and I,
Love entertwined,
Like the ivy,
That grew outside."

My favorite lines. Lovely poem, straight from the heart.

Joy

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2000-06-30 06:42 PM


Kevin, a beautiful poem and wonderful tribute.



A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
7 posted 2000-07-01 03:17 AM


yes a wonderful piece truely heart felt. please do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
8 posted 2000-07-01 03:24 AM


mm, what a sweet poem.. beautiful tribute to your wife..



Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu



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