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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-06-26 06:39 AM


Disposed to compose
Darn, cerebral lethargy
Poetic Gridlock!

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-06-26 07:14 AM


Dennis; There is no such thing!!!! You've written this so well, but I'm a firm  believer that when you put the Giver of the gift in charge, His inspirations are endless.
The ultimate Muse!  Love, Sis <) )

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


kaile
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2 posted 2000-06-26 07:31 AM


I knew you could do it,Dennis...brought a much-needed smile on my face here

you always make my day with your poetry...do post more

Btw, of couse, i remember your writer's block tanka...personally i feel you should post it in VoW...certain you will get lots of votes

will do my own challenge to repay you for your superb effort....hope the muse stays with moi

brian madden
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ireland
3 posted 2000-06-26 04:30 PM


excellent Dennis, inspirational in fact.

"but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art"
Dylan Thomas.

Denise
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4 posted 2000-06-26 09:20 PM


You've said it all, Dennis!  

Denise

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-06-27 09:56 AM


Oh, my!!! Been there done that. Hated it! This is good!!  
PrincessPoet
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6 posted 2000-06-27 01:01 PM


Yes, really Good & like Brian said, Inspiring!


Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


BSC
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7 posted 2000-06-27 01:22 PM


Dennis - How many times have I been there... you sure captured those moments in perfect simplicity.  Bonnie
Alle'cram
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8 posted 2000-06-28 11:48 AM


Dennis,  I like, I like!! Good 'en!
kelieth
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9 posted 2000-06-28 12:33 PM


Good brief description of the terrible plague.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

kaile
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10 posted 2000-06-29 10:17 AM


bringing this up to the top again with A Poet's Tragedy of my own....hope you like

Pen poised in sweat hand~
Mouth pouts for elusive muse~
Waiting for the kill!

thanx for responding to my challenge so beautifully

Dennis L. White
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11 posted 2000-06-29 02:30 PM


Thank you for ALL your kind replies, obviously I'm not the only one who has been there and has gotten the tee shirt! LOL

Kaile , I like your work but this last one you wrote is too much on the Dark Side for my taste, LOL

Thanks again my gridlock friends! LOL


[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 06-29-2000).]

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