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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Distant Shimmer In the most sincerest way I am a distant shimmer, hiding like a pensive child. Insecurities own my soul I know not how to escape the perils as they rule me. I want to run away faster then they ever could follow, yet where would I end up? They'd catch me for sure, one can't run from themselves, it's a dark journey to nowhere. So until I find the security key I only exhibit half the shimmer of what my soul knows I should. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW LD... I only exhibit half the shimmer of what my soul knows I should. Shine as bright as you can when ever you can. "It's these little things, they can pull you under. Live your life filled with joy and wonder." R.E.M sweetness follows. anyway ranting here, an excellent poem. much enjoyed. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
LD - What a terrific poem. Your light shines so brightly in your work, I can't begin to image what the "whole" shimmer would be. Bonnie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Lost Dreamer, A most sincere poem A topic close to my heart An earnest yearn to escape myself A smile from me from putting these feelings in words   |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think your 'shimmer' is just fine! I guess we never truly see ourselves as others do. Great poem, Gloria! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
As always Gloria, beautifully expressed ! |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Lovely Work of Art! Lost Dreamer Poetry & Friendship Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
You hit the nail on the head here. Great job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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