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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-06-22 10:06 PM


Now is the Time

How deep is my wellspring of passion for you
How long I have waited for dreams to come true
How distant the miles, how steep was the climb
Please come to me, darling, for now is the time

With patience we've waited our moment to come
We fulfilled every promise that had to be done
With no roadblocks before us, or mountains to climb
Come quickly, darling, for now is the time

Our loved ones have blessed us and stood by our side
For we struggled and waited the storm to subside
And now we can celebrate our love sublime
So come to me, darling, for now you are mine

Now is the moment that we've waited for
Come let me love you as never before
How deep is my wellspring of passion for you
Now is the time for our love to come true

Elizabeth Santos


© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
les
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since 2000-06-23
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1 posted 2000-06-23 12:48 PM


I love your poem, it has so much feeling and meaning. I hope to read more of your poems soon.
  
les

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
2 posted 2000-06-23 06:08 AM


oh, Liz, this is beautiful. ^_^ a sweet, well written, AWESOME, piece of work.. loved 2 read it. ^_^

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu


Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-06-23 07:51 AM


Wow.  Beautiful, well done, fabulous! What more can I say?  I'm running straight to send this to a friend..   

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

Denise
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4 posted 2000-06-23 08:04 PM


Very beautiful, Elizabeth!  

Denise

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2000-06-24 09:20 AM


wonderfully written Liz. beautiful

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Casonova
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since 2000-04-29
Posts 35
Mays Landing
6 posted 2000-06-24 04:48 PM


Very Beautiful, Had to read it twice, thanks for sharing it with us...
  
                           Casonova.


Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 2000-06-24 10:50 PM


Very beautiful....love coming together after sometime!!  I can relate this piece to my own life...hopes for the future yet to come!!  Thank You Liz!!! This is great!!
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
8 posted 2000-06-25 05:29 AM


Beautiful, Liz! You describe so beautifully what you feel.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-06-25 10:31 AM


Enjoyable, fair lady.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
10 posted 2000-06-29 01:47 AM


beautiful!!

~Heather

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
11 posted 2000-06-29 07:02 AM


Beautiful job.  I'll be frequently reading it.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

kaile
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singapore
12 posted 2000-06-29 11:46 AM


Elizabeth,
(sigh) such a lovely love poem!!! warms my heart to pieces!!

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