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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-06-22 04:59 AM


Humming buzz saws dart
Slurping up precious nectar
Hummmmmmmmm! That's mighty good!

Life's one Humming game
To intimidate and win
Aerial good fun!

Our skill is observed
Each move well calculated
like "blue angels" wee.



[This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 06-22-2000).]

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-06-22 07:44 AM


David; Wonderful job with those tiny ones!
I love the way you portrayed them here. Spending some time on that back porch I see!
Good for you, Bro and job well done. love, sis

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-06-22 07:44 AM


David,
  This is a HONEY of a piece! It Bee real GOOD! I am almost stung with jealously!      Dennis :^)



Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-06-22 09:01 PM


You do these very well, David! This is delightful!  

Denise

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