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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2000-06-22 01:29 AM


Lost Love

Truly, I love you,
but not 'til the end...
I think I'm just fine
remaining as friend.

Understand our love
was only in dreams...
Though child you bare
Is mine, so it seems.

I want to love you
and never depart...
Maybe in distance,
but never in heart.

-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-



[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 06-22-2000).]

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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
1 posted 2000-06-22 02:27 AM


With words like these I truly hope she see's.

Great poem.


Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
2 posted 2000-06-23 07:53 AM


Very honest and touching in a bittersweet way. That's not to say anything bad, just drawing on my own experiences..   .. I'll be watching for more of your work.   I like this.< !signature-->

I awake to a world I don't want.  There is no transition for me.  I am in heaven.  I am in hell.


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kaile
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singapore
3 posted 2000-06-24 12:18 PM


heartwrenchingly honest...do hope the speaker in the poem solves all misunderstandings and gets reunited with his love
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2000-06-24 12:27 PM


Oh my wow....makes me want to cry!!  I hope she sees!!  Loved it, definatly inspires me!!!!  Thanks for taking my challenge, I didn't know you had 'til I peaked in here!!  
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
5 posted 2000-06-24 12:21 PM


Bob really liked the poem,

I want to love you
and never depart...
Maybe in distance,
but never in heart.

I hope you get your wish.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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