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Distance - Justbleu's challenge

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Poet deVine
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I have never seen your face
Except in the photos you send
And though we speak of fantasy
I know this is not pretend

Sometimes I wish the Internet
Wasn’t the only place we could meet
I wish we could sit together
Have a drink or something to eat

Who’s to say where this will lead
Now that we’ve taken this start
So many miles separate us
Maybe in distance, but never in heart

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Justbleu
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1 posted 06-21-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Oh, PDV this is cool!!!  Definatley an inspiration!!  I knew you wouldn't let me down!!  
Me LIKES!!!!
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
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2 posted 06-21-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Sharon, Very nice I like it also, after I'm done with another project maybe I will attempt this challenge.
Little_Spyro
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3 posted 06-21-2000 07:59 PM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

Another devine poem from the DeVine one! (I know it's supposed to be spelled "divine" but "devine" would mean anything near that level written by someone called Sharon...)

Beautiful job (as usual), and very inspiring! I'm in awe!

...mmmff...rrrggghh...and I'm stuck! HELP!!  


                         a struggling
Little Spyro T. Dragon
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4 posted 06-21-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

~Sharon~

The first thought in my mind when I finished reading this poem was "leave it to Sharon to perfect a challenge and then add her own unique creativity to it."  Excellent poem!  
Girl, you have more talent in your baby finger than I do in my whole body!  As always, you're an inpsiration, my friend

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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5 posted 06-21-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great, Sharon! I love it!  

Denise
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This is great.   I enjoy reading your poetry every time.  


Kevin

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7 posted 06-24-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

Poet deVine

love this....so true of today's world as we get increasingly wired by the Internet...and find online friends....this is an realistically accurate that will tug at the heartstrings of many people

a poem much enjoyed
brian madden
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PDV a wonderful poem. It is hard to believe that you can connect to people from your computer screen until it happens to you. much enjoyed.  

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
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9 posted 06-24-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Casonova   Email Casonova   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Casonova

Not much more can be added here..

                      Casonova..

Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.
ESP
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10 posted 06-25-2000 05:52 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Sharon, this is WOW...you have this knack for perfecting your poetry in an awesome way.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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