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Haiku Seasons - Take II
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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as a falling leaf seasons change from sky to earth in white, green, yellow, brown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
love this one lots...the first one reminds us of how transcient the seasons are(hence reference to falling leaf)....and words like "sky", "earth" and the mention of colours take my mind briefly on a journey on what the 4 seasons are like  A challenge well met, allan...looking 4ward to read more of your haiku! BTW, i have a favor to ask...No one has replied to my "Another 4-in-1 Seasons Haiku" yet so will you mind commenting on it for me?Thanx in advance here |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful. keep them coming. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
very good! ^_^ Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I'm now looking forward to autumn. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ A lovely scene indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Pretty! Pity I don't live in a country with 4 seasons...*S* keep posting! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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