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allan
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0 posted 2000-06-20 05:23 PM


Pond rain-spotted grey
mist, cloud, sunhine reflected
all passes, all remains


[This message has been edited by allan (edited 06-20-2000).]

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deleeme
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1 posted 2000-06-20 09:17 PM


I enjoyed your interesting haiku-and you make and interesting statement with it too. It is amazing how much many things seem to remain as constants- though other things are in a constant state of flux--Very good!  David
midnightblues
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2 posted 2000-07-13 08:22 AM


mist, cloud, sunshine...my favourite icons of nature!!! *S* pretty

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lotharingia
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3 posted 2000-07-16 06:56 AM


Did I miss this one?
Wonderful image.  Except that I don't need to be reminded of rain at the moment.  
I especially like this bit:
all passes, all remains
Really mystical!


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


kaile
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4 posted 2000-07-16 10:48 AM


I believe deleeme has said it all glad i didnt miss this lovely haiku
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5 posted 2000-07-16 04:15 PM


Very good indeed, Allan!  

Denise

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