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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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i) snowdrop bends her head wheatstalk whispers in her sleep of ice feather leaves ii) a summer sun sinks dying leaves touch life within growth in melting ice iii) this path is snowbound my thoughts are a setting sun hiding in brown leaves iv) tiger sky rains hail on a rooftop grass seeds drink thirsty for summer [This message has been edited by allan (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
rain runs down your face melts the ice; the sun comes out turning, we leave happy |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
a beautiful piece great talent that you show here i am in wonder.  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Little Dragon says and I appreciate this thought heartfull good today  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
In awe at your gems~ Such nice images conjured~ A pat on your back A job well done,allan like the third one best... this path is snowbound--can refer to the harsh obstacles we have to face in life my thoughts are a setting sun---similarly as the sun sets, my thoughts turn miserably dark hiding in brown leaves--like the sun, my positive attitude is hiding somewhere dead do wonder if that was the kind of sentiments you were aiming for..will love to read your take on this one |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
nice.. ^^ hmm, one thing.. i can't seem 2 find all 4 seasons in these, lol.. hehe shows how observamt I am, eh? ^^ I wonder, could u show me?? well written, allan.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful, beautiful much enjoyed. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ These are remarkably well-done Haiku. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thank you all very much! snowdrop bends her head wheatstalk whispers in her sleep of ice feather leaves snowdrop = Spring wheatstalk = Summer leaves = Autumn ice = Winter a summer sun sinks dying leaves touch life within growth in melting ice growth = Spring summer sun leaves = Autumn (again) ice = Winter (again) this path is snowbound my thoughts are a setting sun hiding in brown leaves OK - you got me, only 3 here! tiger sky rains hail on a rooftop grass seeds drink thirsty for summer rain = Spring (April showers!) seeds = Spring hail = Winter Summer Ahh! Only 3 again! Kaile, interesting symbolism you've found in there! I didn't intentionally (consciously) use them but the Haiku seems an ideal form for bringing the sub-conscious to light! |
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