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Ode to the Poem

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Justbleu
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0 posted 06-20-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

All these words
From the hearts of many
Together in verse
Pen to paper
Finger to key

Prose so captivating
Rhymes of thought
Verse so free
Structured haiku
For all to read

Straight from the heart
Skipping across our brains
Human words all do hold the key
Thoughts of mystery
So deeply true

Poem is a creature
Running so deep
Happiness and joy
Hurt and pain
All intertwined

Touching
So moving
Vivid and real
Eloquently put
Captivatingly sweet

Intention to hold
Elusive and free
Thought provoking
Giving of feelings
Surrender to tears

Powerful
Expressive
Lovely
Intrusive
Beautiful

With all this stated
Through Everything said
Relating to everyone
Across paper with pen
Ones ode to the poem



"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-21-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 06-20-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is wonderful, I love it. Felt like I had just unwrapped a beautiful present, thank you.  
Justbleu
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2 posted 06-21-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You, Dreamer!!
Bridgette  
Denise
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3 posted 06-21-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree, Bridgette, this is lovely! I received your email and I think this is a great poem for the Pub!  

Denise

p.s. It's nice to finally see you! Lovely pic!
Sven
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4 posted 06-21-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent!!

An ode to odes
A ballad about ballads
An epic epic
A sonnet to the sonnet. . .

You get the idea!!!  Great poem!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


kelieth
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5 posted 06-22-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for kelieth   Email kelieth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kelieth's Home Page   View IP for kelieth

That is the best view of poetry and prose that I've ever seen.   Loved every line.    



Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."
kelieth
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6 posted 06-22-2000 02:43 AM       View Profile for kelieth   Email kelieth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kelieth's Home Page   View IP for kelieth

That is the best view of poetry and prose that I've ever seen.   Loved every line.    



Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."
brian madden
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7 posted 06-22-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

a wonderful poem, to the top of the page.
Intention to hold
Elusive and free
Thought provoking
Giving of feelings
Surrender to tears
everything poetry should be.

I think you described the poem best in your own words....
Powerful
Expressive
Lovely
Beautiful




A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Justbleu
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8 posted 06-23-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Denise...I'm glad you think my poem is great for the Pub and that my pic is lovely!!  

Thank You so much, Sven!! I liked your little poem!!


kelieth, What a compliment, Thank You, bunches!!  

Brian, Thank You for your thoughts, and for sending me to the TOP OF THE PAGE!!  

This poem is a bit different from most of my others!!  I am starting to get out of my comfort zone and try new things!!

kaile
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9 posted 06-23-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

eye-catching title, attracting this reader eager to read your poem

lovely sentiments here...moi think you have expressed the different ways poetry can touch us very well indeed love "finger to key" cos these three words express how a good poem can open up our hearts like the metaphor of poem to a creature running deep cos isnt writing poetry difficult for us all?the stubborn words that refuse to form...Writer's Block...writing about the things that hurt...etc

like the ending too...summed everything up so beautifully

for you
An Ode to the Verse

Aspiring poet
           Immersed

Searing pain
           Nursed

a favor to ask of you: i have written a Poetry's Beauty Tanka in Open#8..will love your comments here since they work on the same lines thanx in advance

heres wishing you have success in trying out new styles!!
Justbleu
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10 posted 06-24-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You sooo much for your encouraging thoughts Kaile!!! And your welcome...I enjoyed reading your piece!!!!!
Thanks again!!!  
Bridgette
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11 posted 12-25-2004 11:25 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yes...lovely ode
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