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PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

0 posted 2000-06-19 08:44 PM




When You Say.....


When you say.....
Honey, time to get up for work.
I just try to go back to sleep.

When you say.....
Your car needs oil
I hand over my car keys.

When you say....
I fixed your stereo.
I turn it way up loud.

When you say....
We are invited to a party,
I go even when I hate crowds.

When you say....
What do you want to do?
I try to smile and participate.

When you say....
Baby, what's wrong with you
I can't tell you, just something that I hate.

When you say....
You know, I love you
I know in my soul it's true

So when I say....
I love you back
Remember it's my heart talking to you.


WildChild  6/19/00 Magnolia Manor


Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



© Copyright 2000 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-19 09:05 PM


*sigh* I feel like this too sometimes, dark and unfathomable!
good'un
~Heather

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-06-20 03:55 AM


Wow I had to read this twice.

This is rather wonderful I think.

When you say?.........

Jon

PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
3 posted 2000-06-20 07:42 AM


X Angel...sometimes I think the menopause blues just kick in and life seems so awful but as long as the foundation is intact then life is still cool. Thanks for reading.

Jon...Thank you for your praise. Just been a kinda dark week. I can see some light though. Thanks again.

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2000-06-20 10:19 AM


I can soooooo relate all to well to that!!  Enjoyed this one WildChild!!

Bridgette  


"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
5 posted 2000-06-22 06:53 PM


Sis,
what a wonderfull affirmation of marriage
and long term relationship! A gracious read
from a gracious lady...lol; yes i did indeed use the "L" word!

love you,
D


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"



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