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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Cry In The Moonlight Deep black waters reflect a silver moon shimmering in midnight mists. Eyes drift slowly over ghostly forms, appearing, then fading back into shadow. Thoughts turn to you. So lovely, ethereal; soft golden hair and alabaster skin. God how you excite me! Your face appears on the rippling surface of dark waters. I, mesmerized by unearthly beauty, which only the gods could have created. If I asked, would you wrap me in gossamer silk, and carry me with you? I want – need to float silently over glowing clouds in your loving arms. My heart aches with desire for you. I have no other home but within your heart. © 6/18/00 Gary Pence |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Gary, this is absolutely beautiful ! ! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Oh my God, This is absolutely beautiful. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow gray a beautiful poem, absolutely beautiful. Eyes drift slowly over ghostly forms, appearing, then fading back into shadow. Thoughts turn to you. So lovely, ethereal; soft golden hair and alabaster skin. If I asked, would you wrap me in gossamer silk, and carry me with you? ------------------------ "WE IRISH ARE TOO POETIC TO BE POETS, WE ARE A NATION OF BRILLIANT FAILURES." Oscar Wilde. "Take nothing but pictures |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
My thanks to all of you!  "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything." - anonymous |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow gary, this is great! such beautiful pictures you paint and so romantic...... dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*BIG BIG SIGH* this was gorgeous....I am out scouting all the forums for book submissions cuz I wanna read and cast my votes! I am so glad I came to this forum.... wow ~Heather |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Many thanks dgvarner and X Angel! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Jonas you got my vote for this one,very very nice indeed. Jon |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Exellent hand and touch. Wonderful grace. Looking forward to seeing more. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfectly beautiful. I love the way you used imagery here... sigh! Very nice..  |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
My heart, mind and arms await you openly.. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Again, thank you very much everyone. I am honored by your kind words. Kim - I'll be home soon sweetheart. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
On top of a long flowing sigh, this has to recieve some praise. Beautiful Jonas. Touching, warm, sincere. I am muchly impressed! Christopher |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
My goodness, this is absolutely gorgeous! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*softly applauds* The person on the recieving end of this is very lucky.. Beautiful and touching..  I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you my friends! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Gary, this is fabulous! Wonderfully written! Nice to finally see your face, too! Denise |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you Denise! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
What a stunning poem! *sigh*...I don't have words to describe how beautiful it is. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you Lizzie |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Jonas this was a very nice piece!! Liked it a lot!! To have someone feel so deeply for another is wonderful!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Found this one, and I must say this is very good. Please, never forsake the gift given you to write. Deb |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I'm buzzing around digging for gold - I definitely found some here.. *sigh* - so romantic Gary! -Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...just beautiful |
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