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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2000-06-18 10:54 AM



Canada, oh Canada
what hast thou done with me
whenever I do close my eyes
my heart is there with thee

Your mountains and great forests
of an infinity
Sequoias stand majestically
ancient serenity

What everlasting pleasure
lies in your scenery
the crumbling walls of what once was
beneath a Maple tree

Golden fields of waving grain
whisper a lullaby
the sunset slowly fades away
beyond your endless sky

Canada, oh Canada
what hast thou done with me
I feel thou wisphers in my soul
I wish to be with thee

I spot a single red deer
scent danger in the breeze
the slightest noise will make her flee
among your mighty trees

I see your children playing
out on a frozen pond
at snowball fights and slapping pucks
a magic way beyond

Mem'ries of the days gone by
engraved into my soul
return to you I will some day
it's always been my goal

Canada, oh Canada
what hast thou done with me
thou temptress of my craving heart
I long to be with thee

Munda

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Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2000-06-18 11:10 AM



My God, Munda, this is beautiful!  I have read numerous poems about Canada by Canadian poets, and yours is by far the best, with it's rhyme, it's sentiment and the excellent overview of Canada.  I absolutely love the last verse!  And of course, I agree

Thank you so much for re-posting this for me, I really love it!  Although you're from the
Netherlands, I'm making you a honourary Canadian, my friend    

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee




[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-18-2000).]

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-06-18 11:50 AM


Munda, This is fabulous, I love it immensely.
Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-06-19 07:00 AM


Munda,
  Thanks for reposting this beautiful work.
Melissa must be beaming with pride, ready to explode from such accolades of or country!
Well Done, Dennis :^)

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