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seasonal haikus --kailes challenge

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dgvarner
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0 posted 06-16-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dgvarner

whitest blanket folds
comes the rain and flowers nod
flutter leaves to fly


~*~     ~@~     ~*~


spring forth summer heat
fall into waking winter
and begin again




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Honeybee
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1 posted 06-16-2000 04:49 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


I like both haikus, but, I love the second, very well done!  Challenge well met my friend  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
kelieth
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2 posted 06-17-2000 01:16 AM       View Profile for kelieth   Email kelieth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kelieth's Home Page   View IP for kelieth

Well done.  


 Kevin

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Dennis L. White
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3 posted 06-17-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

DGV,
  Way to go!I also liked the second best!
Dennis :^)



Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

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Yu Lan
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4 posted 06-17-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

hey, awesome! yeah, I reckon the second is rather clever.. hehe.. ok, i must do mine now..

Lynne
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5 posted 06-17-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Two for the price of one and both very good!
Good show!    David
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6 posted 06-19-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

love both ur attempts,dgvarner!
love the line:"whitest blanket folds"....describles snow-capped landscape very well  indeed

very clever with the second haiku....will offer this for you

Winter falls~
Buried land revealed~
Summer springs

this is abbreviated version of haiku(3-5-3)...hope u like it...
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 07-15-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DGVarner~
How perfectly delightful.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 12-25-2004 11:32 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nicely done
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