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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-06-16 02:35 PM




~*LOVE'S GLOW*~

Daylight fades
as shadows dance,
lovers entwined
in an erotic trance,
embracing with delight,
seeking pleasures from each other,
seeking romance
at candlelight,
the walls, awakened, absorb the heat of passion,
fires burn inside and out,
in sultry bliss,
two souls meet as one
with candles blaze,
dancing in sweet ecstasy
of love glowing

*By Melissa Honeybee*


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-16-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-06-16 02:43 PM


Melissa,
  WOW! Get out the firehose, just in case!
Very sensual! This is HOT!  Dennis :^)



 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-06-16 02:53 PM


two souls meet as one
with candles blaze,
dancing in sweet ecstasy
of love glowing

truely beautiful stunning just WOW.



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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde


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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2000-06-16 04:32 PM


ooohh..like to find myself entangled like that!  very romantic  

dg


 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
4 posted 2000-06-17 01:14 AM


All I can say is wow.  Excellent  



 Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-06-18 09:17 AM


Beautiful writing Melissa....beautiful !
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