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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-06-16 12:02 PM


Sleepy plants awake
Feverish sun, colors change
Get new snow blanket

or

New Life, Hot Sunshine
Colors announce the Harvest
Frosty Hiatus


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 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2000-06-16 12:55 PM



Wow Dennis!  Challenge well met!  You are the king of haikus!  Kaile will love this when she sees your haikus.  Both are perfect, I can't decide which I like better.  I'll have to try this challenge  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-06-16 01:17 PM


Two frosty and warm beauties.   Well, I'm off to work on my own.

Joy


Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-06-16 02:24 PM


Melissa,
  I'm not the king of haikus, I'm more like the Haiku Clown! LOL

Thanks for the kind replies!

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-06-16 04:19 PM


well "haiku clown" you've done it again...!!  i enjoy your "clowning"

dg


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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-06-16 07:00 PM


Well, Haiku clown and dear brother mine, They are both superb! Love, Sis C):?)

 Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


kaile
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singapore
6 posted 2000-06-19 07:05 PM


haiku clown...always enjoy ur delightful pieces revealing this great sense of humour and this one is no exception

well done...like Melissa, i can't decide which one i like more!

BTW, to set the record straight, i am a "he"

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
7 posted 2000-06-20 06:53 AM


Kaile, OOPS! Sorry about the wrong gender assumption. It's hard to tell from here, I think it was the name that led me down path there! My faux pas! LOL  Dennis :^(
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