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4-in-1 Seasons Haiku(and challenge to all poets)
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Clothed in snow, i see Cherry blossoms and brown leaves As twilight falls Challenge:write a poem (haiku or otherwise) using "seasonal words" from all the 4 seasons looking 4ward to ur efforts! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Thanks for the challenge I'll give it a stab--David |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thanks Kaile for replying to my senryu in Open Poetry 8, I will definately try this challenge, it may be difficult to write about 4 seasons in only three lines of a haiku, but I'll attempt it. I love a challenge anyways. Great idea Kaile!  Your haiku is great. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This sounds fun, I'll try it too! Debbie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Challenge accepted, response to be posted soon. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Right on it. Thanks for the challenge kaile! Loved your haiku! Joy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
here we go again--i'm in!  great haiku dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
aah yep, well I'm game!! ^_^ post my reply soon.. great haiku! Lynne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great haiku kaile ! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx you guys for reading this....and to deeleeme,dennis,Joy 14,Yu Lan,dgvarner for gamely trying this out...i was rather afraid that this whim of mine will be frowned upon and cast aside among all the posts here looking 4ward to ur attempts...Melissa and debbie thanx for the fine praise, Munda perhaps, more people will like to try this out too? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Interesting concept and quite lovely. Is yours supposed to be 5-7-5 ? I seem to only count 4 syllables in the last sentence. But perhaps I am mistaken. I may give this a try ... however, I will post it in the CHALLENGE Forum. Thanks for inviting me to read the interesting takes on this. There are some very creative Haiku's here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Well I aint no good at challenges.....gulp But I like your verse. Jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
bumping this up for the new poets here to try hope u will have fun |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
kaile, this is too hard for me but a job well done to you! ...you must have viewed this scene from my back yard, as sometimes the leaves remain along the fence row until the coming spring...when somebody around here eventually must sweep, maybe! yelp, I feel better now. LOL. Marcy |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Your challenge is accepted, Kaile. *EL* --Little Girl |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Liked your poem... nicely written. |
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