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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Wandering spaces Run from me As I chase them with a butterfly net From my early days On this earth On this earth So full of swamps And pools of light Filling dirt in a hole To cover an empty space An empty space That flies like a speck of dust That I now watch Flutter to the ground Butterflies once trapped in a net Fly away I wander away from empty spaces. Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old time is still a-flying, And this same flower that smiles today To-morrow will be dying. -Robert Herrick |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is great writing joy! the second rather abstract one i've read in the last 24hrs..  i like abstract...it makes one think on it for a while...unfortunately, i'm not so good at writing that way myself these days...but i enjoyed reading yours  dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I'm with dg - makes you look below the surface - think. Very good. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I thought it was rather abstract myself. Kind of surprised myself. I have a lot of abstract things jumbled up in my head but can very rarely put them down. I'm happy w/ the end result here. Thanks dg and childomine! Joy |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Abstract indeed and enjoyable. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I truly like this a lot Joy ! I do ! I do !  |
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