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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Rain falls unbridled < !signature-->Lapped up by the thirsty soil Eddy currents swirl Lightning leaps unreigned Black cloud hides the skittish Sun Turning day to night .......................................... Â Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 06-15-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; You weave a tapestry of magical wonder in these simple few lines. So excellent. Love, Sis #;?) Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dennis..youre so good at these things!! putting so much "umph" into such a small package... wonderful stuff here! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
WOW, dennis!  |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I wasn't there to experience it- but I feel like I was--your brief words cover it well. David |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Well written but I almost have to ask if there was more than just the storm? Maybe its just late and I'm reading to much. Regardless I like it. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Haiku seems not to be my forte and I admire you guys who can write this form of poetry. Great haiku Dennis ! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis - Dennis - Dennis~ What sheer delight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Oh rain! My favourite of all nature's gifts! LOL this is simply astounding Dennis! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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