»
Archives
»
The Corner Pub
»
A Shy Hello
| The Corner Pub |
|
A Shy Hello |
|
|
kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
A SHY HELLO The day will come, Not far away, When Life will change, or so they say. Spring is here, The sky is bright, No time for tears, No time to fight. I had learned, How to give. Now it's time To learn to live Here she comes, One more time I know that I should speak my mind. As I try to say hello I feel my heart Up in my throat. As she heard My awful croak I think I saw A lighter note. A smile within Those Sea Green Eyes She knew I tried To just say hi. A smile so thin upon her lips She had noticed, Me a bit. K.A.L ____________________________________________________ A shy hello to all I look forward to reading the works here. Kevin |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Kevin A. Lormand - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Kevin this is so sweet. I'm sure each of us has been in a situation like this. I like the topic and the flow. Welcome to the Pub! ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
||
|
JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Welcome first of all and second of all I hope to see more of YOUR work soon.  Joy |
||
|
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Do I remember the time when words were stuck somewhere deep inside ! LOL Yes I do. (I'm not that old yet hehe) I truly liked how you described this feeling. Well done ! And welcome to the Pub.  |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Kelieth! This is a lovely poem! Please check you email for a special welcome! Denise |
||
|
Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Yep yep, count on Denise to always and forever send you an email when you sign on to Passions. (Of course, that only adds to her charm.)  Great poem, kelieth!  I had to go through this same event only back in late January (only her eyes were Deep Down Brown), but was spared any hint of embarrassment as she was acting the exact same way as I was (very shy and a little lightheaded)... Hope to see more of your work, and Welcome to the Pub! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! You're going to like it here! Great poem to enter with! |
||
|
Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow Kevin, your work is stunning! ^_^ hehe, looks like I read them in the wrong order, but hey! ^_^ I look forward to reading more of your work.. if I miss replying to one, plz tell me!! ^_^ lol, a perfect poem for a shy hello to a poetry forum.. and so beautifully expressed!! Lynne |
||
|
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kevin, Great first post, Welcome to the Pub, pull up a chair and Do tell us more. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
||
|
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kevin, Welcome to Passion's I agree this is a wonderful poem to join with, I look forward to more of your poetry. I checked out your site, and ended up joining the RadioFree Cash, so I am now in your downline. I'm enjoying it so far so I hope it gains you some extra money when they are up and running. |
||
|
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah yes....isnt love too fun.. nothing like shy hellos.........good work! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
||
|
demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
The smile will grow broader very very soon if you continue like this Kevin! But I hope your smile will always be as shy and beautiful as this lovely poem you have written Deepak |
||
|
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kevin; You are wecomed with open arms here! Wonderful poem, can't wait to see more! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
||
|
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes welcome and i hope to read more of you also keep them coming this way. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
||
|
dr tung Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55singapore |
this is just such a cute one, enjoyed reading it just like seeing the entire scenerio b4 my eyes, lovely |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
