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Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-06-12 02:09 AM



I thought I heard a story
Of a soul that had been lost,
Gone from days of glory
And suffered such a cost...

I thought that I once heard a tale
Of sorrow spun so well,
A heart once warm now looked like shale
And life a living hell--
Only from that point of view
That clouds the light of day;
Shields the eyes from what is true,
Misleading on the way...

Fortune is a theme park ride
With all its ups and downs,
But there's always good times on the side
If you can hear their sounds--
Listen to what fate can say,
And try to heed its call;
Dare to go a different way
Than not to dare at all

But do not listen to advice
That you don't feel is right,
Go with what just might suffice
And keep close to your sight
Of the future, keep it bright
No matter how it looks,
There's always room for a little light
In the darkened nooks.

And don't forget this, keep in mind
That friends await you here,
Most of us (I think) you'll find
Do hold you very dear!  


_________________________________________________________________
I don't really know how this came up, I started writing with the intention of cheering up fe, but it ended up kind of demeaning...  

Well, whatever I can't put into rhyme, I can always say in regular words:
Hope the situation improves for you, fe! And hope that that sadness you express so vibrantly turns into joy sometime soon.  


Little Spyro T. Dragon




[This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 06-12-2000).]

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Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-06-12 05:39 AM


What a wonderful way to welcome Fe back Spyro.

How can she resist.

You've said it for everyone.

Jon

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
2 posted 2000-06-12 12:30 PM


thank you so much my little dragon friend. you cheered me up just by writing something for me. i dont know what to say but thanks.  I always (since i started comin here) knew you were the best.

 Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might have,
and should have.
--Louis Boone


Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-06-12 07:24 PM


This is great, Sam, not demeaning at all! You are a sweetheart!  

Denise

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
4 posted 2000-06-13 12:26 PM


hey there =]
  This is cool.....how do these words come to you?? i wish they'd come to me!! ^*sigh*^......lol well anyways,just letting you know how much i liked this.!!  

swampius


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-06-14 03:50 PM


little spyro..
youre the coolest little dragon i've ever known...well, ok--youre the only little dragon i've ever known...!!  but if there were others, you would be far superior!  

this is a wonderful poem!....youre such an awesome writer...and have so much time in front of you to do so much more!!!  

"Dare to go a different way
Than not to dare at all"

great line..a theme song for the soul...

hugs little dragon..dg




 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

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