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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2000-06-10 05:45 AM




My mouse jumps like a real acrobat
Flying over my screen like a bat
It behaved like a pup
I got really fed up
So I fed it to one of my cats

© Copyright 2000 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-06-10 06:32 AM


LOL good one Munda!  


I see that you've returned for a while
And, as always bringing me a smile
With your excellent posts,
Tender like roasts--
Fat-free and so versatile!      

So good to see you here again, hope you can stay a little longer! I see you've got a standing ovationist crowd over at the Opens...as it should be... But don't forget your little cheering squad back here at the Pub!  


Little Spyro T. Dragon,
Dragon Cheerleader



brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-06-10 09:53 AM


Yes mices are chewy and fat
but us cats prefer rats
they are juicy, doughy and sweet
nothing like tender vermin meat
serviced with garnish on my mat.

HHHHMMMMMMMMMMMM vermin

big laugh from your poem Munda.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

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"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-06-10 12:05 PM


Poor little mousie.  Cute poem though.  Reminds me of the limericks I used to do.  Hey, I should dig some of those up.  They are sure like this one, to bring me some laughs!  

Joy

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
4 posted 2000-06-10 04:14 PM


Well… you may have cats who eat meat
but my cat is picky and neat,
we keep HER pet mouse in a little pink house
and carrots are all SHE will eat!

LOL
Debbie

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-06-12 10:48 AM


Oh my goodness ! What a delight to see you all this inspired by five simple lines.  
Thanks everyone !

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
6 posted 2000-06-12 11:44 AM


Munda,
  Thank you for sharing your Limerick. I will try to be more disciplined on my next attempt at this form. LOL Dennis :^)



 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
7 posted 2000-06-12 02:15 PM


Amusing little tale.  That's one we'll fed cat. lol.  
Denise
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8 posted 2000-06-12 07:01 PM


This is delightful, Munda! So glad to see you posting again!  

Denise

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
9 posted 2000-06-13 11:39 PM


So you killed your mouse-per confession,
'Cause it failed to make your selection,
But I ask, is it wise
To feed your tabby such mice?
It may break teeth or cause indigestion!

Good one Munda--keep 'em comming!  David

[This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 06-13-2000).]

kaile
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singapore
10 posted 2000-06-15 11:45 PM


But my cat was sad
Biting me, it went mad
Such gross meat it won't eat
It's no wonder it's not fat
Sreaming, i shouted "Tabby Bad!"

not too good with limericks,i'm afraid but nonetheless will attempt to write one to show you how much i enjoyed

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