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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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Thorn-Bit such beauty is the provenance of pain... as i looked i beheld a softness; velvet for my fingertips. in the morn i saw a dewdrop resting peacefully on your face. i reached for you to hold you close that i might fully enjoy your beauty-- such beauty is the provenance of pain; thorn-bit... dgvarner "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely beautiful!!! I loved it.  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wowthisissuchgreatpoetry!! ^_^ I loved this, truly serene, beautiful words.. Lynne |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Beauty indeed. very beautiful Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..thanks guys--youre too kind! i didnt expect such great comments on this one..  it makes such a difference to get all the replies... thanks again!! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
velvet for my fingertips...What a pretty line! Good Job, it's a sweet poem! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was wonderful DG ... I loved the flow and feel of this poem, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great poem. "love hurts" an expression I know well. Enjoyed it. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Oh, I think I like your's so much more. It's so graceful, and gentle, where mine was more searching to find the beauty, than finding it there so beautifully. Thanks for sharing yours I really enjoyed it. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
debbie--thats my favorite line too velvet... kit--thanks for the "well done" pat on the back kelieth--yes..love does hurt..i know it pretty well myself!...but when it feels good, it feels REAL good doesnt it! lost dreamer--i'm glad you liked it just 2 different aspects of loves beauty and its way of wounding..i like them both < !signature-->Â "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DG, What a beautiful poem, tender and sweet but with a POINT! Love has it's risk, and beauty has its thorns. Very nice. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!!  I'm not really sure what to say about this, except to echo the comments of everyone else! Absolutely beautiful, gorgeous poem! My favorite part was the dewdrop...I've always been fascinated with dew forming in the morning, and I reserve two days a month to just go out there at around five or six A.M. and sit on the grass.Kind of keeps me in touch with nature, in the midst of all the urban chaos.  Dragons DO need their time like that, you know! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ This is just the essence of the beauty of the rose. Lovely  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
BEE-OO-TEE-FOOL!!! Golly I love this! Darn if I could write like this *poutZ* heh gimme more!*S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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