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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Seventh Heaven I see my face within thy mirror of time amidst my eyes of green lies crows feet ye cast an illusion of beauty with rhyme only for a fair maiden to gallantly greet. Mine eyes disable thy needed confidence to be available to thy steed riding Knight ye scroll on thy oak desk only coincidence thine words delightful send me in flight. Thy dragon of time has danced too close slowly dipping thy age into obliviousness with ye image before me as slowly ye arose off ye steed approaching with nervousness. Thy hand outstretched in design of desire how can thee fair maiden decline ye grace? Thoughts rustle around while palms afire just dreaming of riding off within ye pace. Ye come close and cradle thy body in arms so strong I feel like an innocent child in love carrying me to thy steed exhibiting ye charms leaving me in seventh heaven on wings of dove. [This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sounds like a strong Knight  Ye cast an illusion of beauty with rhyme. Wonderful line Jon [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Another great poem from you Esmeralda ! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Esmeralda, abeautiful tale of olde love in them dark days of knights and dragons and maidens. slowly dipping thy age into obliviousness with ye image before me as slowly ye arose off ye steed approaching with nervousness. Thy hand outstretched in design of desire how can thee fair maiden decline ye grace? Thoughts rustle around while palms afire a beautiful poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Esmeralda, Be still my heart! WOW! Thy verse so sweet and pleasing to mine eye. So good to see thee posting here again. I shall tell the White Knight of thy return! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Excellent poem written with grace. Enjoyful to the last. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like the place to be, Esmeralda! Lovely poem! Denise |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, I don't know about time, but I think I can dance...  And I really hope that knight doesn't all of a sudden decide to slay me!  Really, though, this is a beautiful poem (as I'm sure you've heard already)... "Ye come close and cradle thy body in arms so strong I feel like an innocent child in love carrying me to thy steed exhibiting ye charms leaving me in seventh heaven on wings of dove." That was definitely my favorite line (with the one where you mentioned the dragon coming a close 2nd )Beautiful job, Esmeralda! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Jon: Thanks for reading and replying. Munda: Hugs my friend, thank you very much. Brian: Thanks from the depths of my heart. Dennis: Wow, I'm shocked at such a glorious reply, thank you very much. I saw that White Knight got your message. Kevin: Much thanks for your kind reply. Denise: Thank You very kindly my friend. Little_Spyro: You are so gracious, my dragon will never slay you, have no fear. Thanks for enjoying thy poem. |
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