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Swamp Fire

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2001-04-06 03:14 PM

Green mist rises
to float over deep verdant swamp.
A dragon flies with iridescent wings
to hover over stagnant air
frozen in mid-flight.

Hidden horizon flashes an emerald dream;
and suspended world moves on, so it seems.

Wordancer, the one who dances with words.

[This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 04-07-2001).]

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-04-06 04:21 PM

Beautiful as usual

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-04-06 05:37 PM

This creates a mysterious scene. I have never seen swamp fire, but have read about it. Very nicely done.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-04-06 10:12 PM

I like Trillium have never seen a swampfire, byou describe it magnificently. Sounds very mysterious. Joyce

laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-08 11:54 PM

Another mystical moment!
I love your imagery....and how you've used 'A dragon flies'....
I see the colors, sense the atmosphere...
Excellent!
Lary

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-11-25 02:35 PM

Beautiful!

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