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deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-06-08 10:18 AM

It was in Early December
  [Oh no, it was late July]
When I had my first girl friend
  [Oh no, that was a passer-by]
She was to me most beautiful
  [Yes, at the Dog Show she took first prize]
And she literally stole my heart away
  [Oh no, that was your Big Mac and fries]
I'll never forget that lovely young lass
  [Why waste your limited brain power on her?]
Oh excuse me, what was I talking about?
  [Oh good, he's going into a blur!]
Did I ever tell you 'bout my first love?
  [Oh no, there he goes again!]
She was my smart and pretty Dove
  [I's say she was a real bird-brain]
I've loved her ever since that day
  [Old fool, you don't know what love is]
She has been my heart's desire
  [Do you expect me to believe all of this?]
Tho' I have never told her
  [It's too late for that, don't you think?]
But it's been you, Sweetie, all along!
  [Oh my dear, you say the sweetest things!]

[This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 06-15-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2000-06-08 10:39 AM

dear David; LOL! I love this poem! What a great idea! This really would be a terrific song. Maurice Chevalier sang a song once called "I remember it well" with Hermione Gingold from "GiGi". It reminds me of your poem. Now I'm rambling, sorry. Probably because I miss our chats! Love, Sis

02

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-06-08 11:56 AM

great fun read

made me smile.

Jon

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-06-08 07:09 PM

David,
Sounds like the communication I have with my wife,LOL. Thanks for the humorus read!!!
Dennis :^)

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

4 posted 2000-06-13 02:54 AM

hehe, what a great poem David! ^_^

humorous..
Lynne

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

5 posted 2000-06-13 03:00 AM

Three words!!

LOL  B T
auo   i   i
utu   g   m
g d      e
h
i
n
g

Hmm...wait, no that's nine words...or is it twelve? Something about limited brain power...mmm...what was I saying? Oh, yes! Remember that thing with the castor oil? Oh, wait, that's not it...never mind...

Little Spyro T. Dragon

[This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 06-13-2000).]

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

6 posted 2000-06-13 03:06 AM

LOL I liked the poem I'll be gettin a kick out of it for some time to come.

Kevin.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-06-14 09:48 PM

ROFL

Very entertaining, David!

Denise

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

8 posted 2000-06-14 10:04 PM

LOL nicely written

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