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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-06-07 08:37 PM


Spooky Style

Trace the core of their existence
they'll promise you no resistance
stretch their branches into time
you'll see their innocent of crime.

Scene takes place in the darkness
some thought they saw a Lochness
one man knew evil draped his home
each day he watched images roam.

Take note the facts upon your door
the crimson red blood on the floor
taste the red slivered apple slowly
meet the ugly monster within wholly.

Sniveled grins they grant the taker
they only wanted to meet the shaker
His rib laughter sets the stage afire
than they were cooking within the fryer.

The angels cold eyes were set free
they beg you now to hear their plea
the house of doom cast far away
this was all an act in their crazy play.

See the frail old man he tricked Treat
than he removed all their soft seats
they didn't observe him floating ship
he wasn't allowed to be off on a trip.

The stage is set in spooky style
enough to make the devil smile
actor's roles chosen for the best
it's climax reaching over crest.

Crimson red blood simply fake
not a body to find drown in lake
imagination's play finest at work
yet maybe a monster does lurk.



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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2000-06-07 10:50 PM


hmmmmm..leaves one to ponder a while...very good writing!  

dg

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-06-08 07:29 AM


How real the actors and scenes can seem.  I love the title of this.

"...imagination's play finest at work
yet maybe a monster does lurk"

Makes one think.....

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-06-08 12:01 PM


I get this is a poem questioning influences.

I like the style a lot.

Regards

Jon

Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 147

4 posted 2000-06-08 05:32 PM


Mwahahamwahahaha.......almost feels like the "stute this poem, no wonder I love it !  
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-06-10 05:07 AM


A 'spooky' poem indeed. Liked the title, liked the poem and liked the style, but did I get it all ?  
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-06-13 02:33 PM


dgvarner: Thanks for your reply, and still even leaves me pondering.  

childomine: Thanks for reading and replying.  

Jon: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. You could be right, I never thought it that way till you mentioned it, but now I can see it.  

Lady in Red: Thanks for reading, now hurry and hide there's a wanted poster up with a reward for your return.  

Munda: Thanks my friend, does anyone ever get it all?  

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
7 posted 2000-06-14 10:01 AM


Good poem.  I enjoy gettin' "spooked" every now an then.  



 Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

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